tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post1071497547729608378..comments2023-05-09T21:03:02.738-04:00Comments on Knight Chills: Book of the DamnedSilent Screams: A Blog About Lifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15545989854023945226noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-58235959514586938032010-07-24T11:35:03.343-04:002010-07-24T11:35:03.343-04:00Thanks Mazzz, I think you rock, so I'm blushin...Thanks Mazzz, I think you rock, so I'm blushing right now. :-)Silent Screams: A Blog About Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15545989854023945226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-71447091113777667642010-07-24T11:03:42.149-04:002010-07-24T11:03:42.149-04:00How utterly, utterly grim (in a good way, I hasten...How utterly, utterly grim (in a good way, I hasten to add, I love grim!)<br /><br />Great build-up to the horrible reveal(s)!<br /><br />I'm also reminded of one of my favourite X-Files episodes, "Home" <br />http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Home_%28The_X-Files%29mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-43798463316707320962010-07-24T08:21:46.354-04:002010-07-24T08:21:46.354-04:00Thanks for comments and for catching a few errors....Thanks for comments and for catching a few errors. I'll have to remedy that right away, John. I was thinking about continuing this story, perhaps once a month since there's so much more we need to learn. :-) Poppet: thanks for a putting another smile on my face. You are way too kind. ;-)Silent Screams: A Blog About Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15545989854023945226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-48477926895385406292010-07-24T07:32:33.900-04:002010-07-24T07:32:33.900-04:00Oh God this is grim... Nomar!! I thought I was tou...Oh God this is grim... Nomar!! I thought I was touching horror - you give it a whole new level!! Brilliant - natch - I can see this as a movie - my skin is crawling!!!!Poppethttp://authorpoppet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-52963440179859523882010-07-24T00:08:49.113-04:002010-07-24T00:08:49.113-04:00Well, that's a horrid fate to suffer. Your bod...Well, that's a horrid fate to suffer. Your body turned to a rape factory for killers. They deserve a kid who will rebel. Would you ever write about that twist?<br /><br />If you want them, I have a couple of technical points: <br />Third paragraph: "She inherited her mother’s physique except those dreaded eyebrows." - eyebrows aren't a physique thing, they're "looks." You also make it sound like her mother has the eyebrows and she doesn't, but it later sounds like it's the other way.<br /><br />Second to last paragraph, "their amazing" for "they're amazing"John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com