tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post6172329046070904434..comments2023-05-09T21:03:02.738-04:00Comments on Knight Chills: The Face of Death by Ranee DillonSilent Screams: A Blog About Lifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15545989854023945226noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-21529863916945129752011-02-04T09:11:41.849-05:002011-02-04T09:11:41.849-05:00Oh my Gawd! That was great. Also loved the pictu...Oh my Gawd! That was great. Also loved the picture but even withoug the words paint their own picture.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01912641441536207956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-74030383970448922842010-10-22T01:42:19.928-04:002010-10-22T01:42:19.928-04:00I love this. There were one or two things I notice...I love this. There were one or two things I noticed that stuck out & broke the rhythm, but the core of this - the images, the idea behind it, the words you chose - all those things that really give a poem its strength...I loved them. <br />If it matters, it was the use of double at at, and the lines "the face of death is one I know I watch my love in fear." I had to read them twice b/c of the lack of a pause, but...other than that? Well done. <br />~LaurieSlainiahttp://www.poeticdistaste.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4299381166771233729.post-15774244205332013142010-10-20T11:29:01.997-04:002010-10-20T11:29:01.997-04:00Interesting. Great imagery.Interesting. Great imagery.M Paxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.com