Love's Prisoner
By Nomar Knight
Sometimes love
doesn't knock on the door,
But breaks it down.
And when it sweeps
you away
Watch out!
Like in a vampire's
embrace you become its willing captor.
Love hypnotizes you
Makes you do things
you'd never thought possible
In a blink!
Love whips you into
a frenzy
And makes you beg for more
Before you know it
Nothing else matters
The soft caress, the
all consuming gaze, the pitter patter heartbeat
Overtakes common
sense
And squeezes every drop out of you
Ah, to love with
passion
And be loved with fury is the ultimate sensation
There shouldn't be a
question of why
Screw analysis!
Let love take you
prisoner and see how you'll finally be alive!
Lovely poem, my friend! Not much luck in the love department for me, though. Maybe someday!
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Great coverage ! Nice poem and lovely ! My school is currently holding a contest for one to two winning poems or short stories to be published into the school magazine, and I wanted to be a part of this. I have submitted one poem on the topic of Autumn, but I don't feel it's the best to win. Any tips/suggestions would be great and poem ideas.
ReplyDeleteHello Blaze. I'm sorry about your love woes.
ReplyDeleteThe best advice I can give for writing poetry is to make sure it's emotional and packed with imagery. Good luck, Here, and do have fun!
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